"Not because you haven’t failed in the past." Do mean ..."have failed..." instead of "...haven't failed..."? Not sure what the intent is? Thank you for the closing blessing.
I will rewrite that, but the logic is correct. The wording is stilted. "God is pleased when you show up. Not because you solved your problems or because you succeeded at everything. Love takes delight in your courage to show up and start over."
"Not because you haven’t failed in the past." Do mean ..."have failed..." instead of "...haven't failed..."? Not sure what the intent is? Thank you for the closing blessing.
I will rewrite that, but the logic is correct. The wording is stilted. "God is pleased when you show up. Not because you solved your problems or because you succeeded at everything. Love takes delight in your courage to show up and start over."
That should work better
Thanks for the affirmation about the blessing!
Thank you. I understand the meaning much better.
Thanks, David! This is the kind of feedback I need
What a beautiful ‘Closing Blessing’! Thank you